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The Pet by StephanieRose12, literature

  • June 11
  • United States
  • Deviant for 10 years
  • She / Her
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My Bio
A real life Puppygirl owned by a wonderful couple. Spend as much time as I can as spot. Pictures and more of my story soon!

Favourite TV Shows
Big Bang Theory
Favourite Bands / Musical Artists
Counting Crows - Matchbox 20 - Tony C and the Truth
Favourite Writers
J Kenner, Sylvia Day,

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Thanks for liking Pyrosthenes' Volunteer Victim Mina. :kiss:
thanks for the fave!
Most Welcome! Pup's gotta stick together right??? I mean one pup alone can't play Tug o War :) :)
very true! *wags*
Thanks for watching Hon :kiss:
You are welcome! Love your story, hope you'll write more.

The only thing I would suggest is work on putting the thoughts of the Captors and Mina a bit closer together. It's kind of hard reading to go without warning between the two. Sorta like DejaVu.  Other than that you are a talented writer and i'm envious of Mina :)

If you see my writing (journal) you'll see why I'm envious :) Look forward to hearing your feedback Ma'am.

Have a wonderful day!
Stephanie Rose (spot)
hi Stephanie.
This series was an interactive development done with a co-writer on a Yahoo group. Consequently we would be writing in response to a reply, hence the disjointed feel to it.