You are welcome! Love your story, hope you'll write more.
The only thing I would suggest is work on putting the thoughts of the Captors and Mina a bit closer together. It's kind of hard reading to go without warning between the two. Sorta like DejaVu. Other than that you are a talented writer and i'm envious of Mina
If you see my writing (journal) you'll see why I'm envious
Look forward to hearing your feedback Ma'am.
Have a wonderful day!
Stephanie Rose (spot)